I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 28 June 2017
Thursday, 15 June 2017
Mega city
Saved money for motor bike
Playing guitar
Brought dog food
Once upon a time in a city called megacity there was this boy and his big hairy black dog. They were so poor with no money so until then at night he kept going out to play his guitar until his glass jar got filled with money. He was saving his money for a red flashing motor bike, but instead he got some of the yummiest dog biscuits for his dog and then they went for a trip to the open world.And he took his guitar and stayed with his big fluffy dog,and I think he kept practising playing his guitar.
Later on in life the boy and his companion friend carried on into the world. Until he met a new pet dog because his other dog died. His name is buster jack,his dogs name is harry.There are so many skycrapers in mega city said jack.Dog said wof wof wof.
The end!
By brinley
Wednesday, 14 June 2017
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