The Best First Day Ever
It was william’s first day at school. There was braking news.It said that an elephant broke thru its cage... The police told everyone to keep calm. Then it broke thru william’s school. Williams mouth dropped wide open. The elephant did not know where it was going and then it crashed into a tree...The elephant flew so high that the tree fell on the power lines?! Then the whole thing caught fire?! William had a plan. He had a wheelchair and he could turn it into a hovercraft.So then he did it. He also had a fire cannon as well. So then he did the fire cannon at the fire. The elephant looked really heart. So then that went to the vet. And everyone was cheering for william. Then
Next... But then the news told the whole world that a Giraffe escaped from out of the zoo. Then the giraffe got paranoid And ran for its life. And ran into William's school and started eating the trees until they would fall over. Then what happened as the giraffe chewed two trees until they fell down. Its belly got bigger,bigger, and bigger until he would explode. All the leafs went everywhere william
[said,ewww! Whyyyyy torture!] Then everyone said, ewwwwwww! Then everyone ran for their lives. That was william’s first day at school thanks for reading my story.
By [Brinley]
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