MY SPORT
My sport is soccer.
1.you need to dribble the ball
2.you need to kick the ball
3.your goal is to get a goal
4.you always need to practice your soccer skills.
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Hi Brinley it is Hunter from yaldhurst model school I like your blog post about soccer next time I think you should ad more detail.
ReplyDeleteHI its me Rihanna in rimu I have to show my brother this he really likes sports but he doesnt know how to play hes only five and wants to play soccer and rugby (ive even learnt a lot from you)anyway great job
ReplyDeleteHello Brinley.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year six and I am in Rimu Class.
I really liked how you said your sport, I also liked how you used pictureds as well as text.
My sport is netball I play A or D ( attack or defence )
What place do you play in soccer?
Next time you could get png pictures so the have no background to get png pictures you just search png after you sentence example soccer png.
Kind Regards Maddison.