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The Best First Day Ever

It was william’s first day at school. There was braking news.It said that an elephant broke thru its cage... The police told everyone to keep calm. Then it broke thru william’s school. Williams mouth dropped wide open. The elephant did not know where it was going and then it crashed into a tree...The elephant flew so high that the tree fell on the power lines?! Then the whole thing caught fire?! William had a plan. He had a wheelchair and he could turn it into a hovercraft.So then he did it. He also had a fire cannon as well. So then he did the fire cannon at the fire. The elephant looked really heart. So then that went to the vet. And everyone was cheering for william. Then

Next... But then the news told the whole world that a Giraffe escaped from out of the zoo. Then the giraffe got paranoid And ran for its life. And ran into William's school and started eating the trees until they would fall over. Then what happened as the giraffe chewed two trees until they fell down. Its belly got bigger,bigger, and bigger until he would explode. All the leafs went everywhere william

[said,ewww! Whyyyyy torture!] Then everyone said, ewwwwwww! Then everyone ran for their lives. That was william’s first day at school thanks for reading my story.

By [Brinley]

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Cybersafety

Mega city

Saved money for motor bike

Playing guitar

Brought dog food

Once upon a time in a city called megacity there was this boy and his big hairy black dog. They were so poor with no money so until then at night he kept going  out to play his guitar until his glass jar got filled with money. He was saving his money for a red flashing motor bike, but instead he got some of the yummiest dog biscuits for his dog and then they went for a trip to the open world.And he took his guitar and stayed with his big fluffy  dog,and I think he kept practising playing his guitar.

Later on in life the boy and his companion friend carried on into the world. Until he met a  new pet dog because his other dog died. His name is buster jack,his dogs name is harry.There are so many skycrapers in mega city said jack.Dog  said wof wof wof.

The end!     

By brinley

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